Finding Eloise – A tip for understanding your character more deeply #writer #writing #book #character #image #tip

F3 Eloise - A_Woman_doing_Laundry_by_Henry_Robert_Morland

Writing a main character who is so different from all my other heroines – indeed so different to anyone’s heroines – has been a challenge. But fortunately I have had some help.

I have been writing about Eloise for nearly a year. My first descriptions of her were vague, perhaps a bit 2D (sallow, plain, flat-chested – a deliberate ‘antiheroine’). And then I discovered this painting – and that was her. Superficially (colouring/figure) she wasn’t much like the description I had already written, but in terms of her personality, she seemed perfect. So of course I then had to go back and change her description – but that was fine as it only improved the book. She could still be an antiheroine – but it was her unconventional personality and life decisions that made her so.

Once I had the painting, I understood so much more about her character. She is saucy and knowing, and although not strictly beautiful, she knows how to make the most of her attributes. And she will stop at nothing to get what she wants (although she is clever enough to hide her most of her manipulations). I am sure you love her already (slight sarcasm) … I am certainly enjoying the challenge of working with a character who is basically not very likable – the fun bit is bringing out her good points to balance the bad, and seeing if she can at least partly redeem herself.

I’m getting really close to finishing the first draft of ‘The Secret Life of Eloise’ and I couldn’t have done it without this WikiCommons painting. (very grateful to all who contribute to this great resource for historical novelists).

I’m thinking about using this painting on her front cover as well – I will provide a sneak peek when the design is finished. I’m hoping the ‘The Secret Life of Eloise’ will be out by November 2015 (with the two earlier books in the series out in July and September).